WRTG 1310   Introduction to College Writing       Fall 2004

Dr. John Vanderslice

Office: Thompson 338

Office phone: 450-3653

Office hours: MWF: 11-2, TTH 9:30-10:30

E-mail: johnv@mail.uca.edu    Web site: http://faculty.uca.edu/~johnv

 

UCA Policy on Disablities:  It is the policy of UCA to accommodate students with disabilities, pursuant to federal and state law.   Any student with a disability is encouraged to contact the Disabled Student Services office which is located in the Student Center basement.  The phone number is 501-450-3135.

 

UCA Policy on Sexual Harassment:  Sexual harassment by any faculty member, staff member, or student is a violation of both law and university policy and will not be tolerated at the University of Central Arkansas.   Individuals who believe they have been subjected to sexual harassment should report the incident promptly to their academic dean or to a departmental supervisor or directly to the university’s Affirmative Action officer, legal counsel or assistant vice president for human resources.

 

Materials:    Steps to Writing Well with Additional Readings,

                            6th ed. (STWW) by Jean Wyrick

         Good, college-level, portable dictionary (e.g.,  Webster's,

        American Heritage)

                     Spiral notebook for journal

           Bring text and journal to every class

 

Course description: College Writing is a course designed to improve your fluency with written and spoken English as well as to make you a more astute reader of your own work and the work of others.  To this end, you will write essays and read a number of essays.  Writing will be presented as a multi-layered process which includes prewriting strategies and drafting.  You will invent and revise, interact with other writers in small group discussions and peer review sessions, and practice the skill of reading with an eye toward improving your own writing.

 

Reading Assignments (or How to Use a Syllabus):  You are required to read all the selections from STWW indicated on the semester schedule.  You should come to class each day having already read the assignment for that day.  For example, the reading assignment for September 20 is STWW:  “38 Who Saw Murder Didn’t Call the Police” by Martin Gansberg (593-95) and “Beauty: When the Other Dancer is the Self”by Alice Walker (606-11).  This means you enter the classroom on September 20 having already read those two essays from  STWW.  In my mind, keeping up with the reading is integral to this—or any other—course.  Failure to do so will speak very poorly of you as a student, and it will be very difficult for you to receive a satisfactory grade on papers and for the course. 

 

Major Papers:  In this course, you will complete one short descriptive paper, a short dialogue assignment, two full length essays—a personal narrative and a critique of an argument—and a persuasive speech.  In the latter part of the semester you will present the speech to the class. 

 

These papers should be typed or word processed, double-spaced, with a conventional margin (one inch) on all sides.  I prefer that you use one of the following fonts: Times New Roman or Bookman.  Your font size should be 12 point.  Every paper must include a cover page with your name, the course name, the title of the essay, and the date it was handed in.  Finally, all papers must be stapled together when turned in.  As the writer, it is your responsibility—and I would hope your desire—to make your papers seem as neatly put together as possible.  This can only help your grade.

 

Peer review:  For as long as there have been writers, they have exchanged their work and responded to each other's work.  It is a healthy, constructive habit, one which we will foster in this class.  Not only is peer review a standard practice of working, professional writers—who, after all, students ought to emulate—but it's simply a fact of life that students learn as much from reading each other's work, and responding to that work, as they do from a textbook or a teacher.  For the narrative, argument critique, and—in a different manner—the speech, you will receive direct feedback from your peers, and give them feedback as well.   At the end of the semester you will receive a peer review grade.  If you miss even one peer review session it will be impossible for you to get an A for your peer review grade; if you miss more than one peer review session it will be difficult for you to get a passing peer review grade.

Peer review drafts should be typed and as long, or nearly as long, as the minimum requirement for the final draft. 

If a student does not arrive in time for the start of peer review or does not bring a paper, the student will not be allowed to participate in peer review and will be counted as absent.

 

Paper editing:  The grades you receive on your papers are the grades I feel they would deserve if these papers had no spelling or grammatical errors.  Earning those grades, therefore, is contingent upon you fixing all the noted errors.  For the sake of everyone's convenience, on the days that I hand back graded papers the class will break into small editing groups.  In those groups, you will help each other correct the grammatical or spelling errors I have pointed out.  Make sure to bring a portable, college-level dictionary to these sessions.  After finishing, each group will show me their corrected papers so I can make note of these in my grade book.  If a student has not corrected a paper by the end of the semester, the grade for that paper you be reduced by a full letter grade.

 

Second drafts: After the peer review sessions are completed—and before you turn in the second draft of a paper—you should revise the paper to take into consideration the concerns addressed in the peer review sessions.  For instance, if the peer review sessions for the narrative paper deal with purpose, characterization, and dialogue, then you should revise the paper to improve your characterization, increase the amount of relevant dialogue, and better impart a sense of purpose to the narrative.  When you turn in to me the second draft of each paper, you must also turn in 1) a (one page, typed) statement explaining what changes you made as a result of peer review, and 2) your peer review draft.  I won't grade the paper without both of these.

 

Final portfolio: More instructions will come later but for the essentials are this: the final portfolio will contain 1) a cover letter (3 pages, typed) and 2) further revisions of the two of the papers you turned in during the course of the semester.  Specifically, you may revise two of the following: the description paper, the narrative, or the critique.  (The speech will not be returned in time for you to revise for the final portfolio.)  Along with the newly revised versions of two papers, you must turn in a.) the earlier version which I graded and commented on (make sure my comments are attached), and b) a one page typed statement for each revision explaining what you were trying to accomplish with that revision. 

 

Journal: You are required to have a separate spiral notebook (roughly 81/2" X 11" in size)—no loose pages of paper, please—which you use only for your journal.  Your journal for this class will have two separate roles: 1) it will be the place for you to store writing done for in-class exercises and 2) it will be a place for you to store writing completed in a  private place for private reasons.  Put the two different kinds of writings in two distinct, separate sections of your journal.  Both are required.

 

In-class exercises: You are required to complete every in-class exercise we introduce in class.  When I check your journals I should easily locate every in-class exercise the class worked on since last I checked.  If entries are missing, the journal grade will be lowered.  If you miss a class in which we write in our journals you should find out from me or a classmate what the in-class writing entailed and make it up on your own before the next journal check.  Please write “In-class entry # _______” and the date before every in-class entry.  I should be able to tell from any given entry that you took the writing seriously, that you threw yourself into the in-class exercise.  If you wrote little or next-to-nothing during an in-class exercise you will get no credit for that entry. 

 

Private writing: You may fill these pages with any kind of writing at all: thoughts, problems, gripes, bits of poetry, unsent letters, song lyrics, descriptions of weekend trips or fights with girlfriends or how you want to redecorate your apartment.  Whatever. Because these journal entries are private, I will not read them, only check to make sure that you are filling the required number of pages.  If you do, you will receive credit for each entry.   I expect you to complete two full pages of private writing per week for a total of 30 pages of private writing by semester’s end. 

 

Important note: Class notes from this or any other class do not count as private writing.  Rough drafts of papers for this or any other class do not count as private writing.

 

All journal entries must be handwritten into the journal book.  I will not accept computer printouts or any other kind of papers simply stuffed inside, or anything glued or stapled.  I expect you to keep up with your journals without my constantly reminding or hounding you.  Twice during the semester, however, I will ask you to turn in your journals so I can check them. 

 

Last Note: To be of any benefit to you as a writer and person journal writing should be an on-going, semester-long enterprise—not something crammed in at the last minute.  Therefore, I cannot credit you for more than 15 pages of private writing in the second half of the semester.  Nor will I, at the second check date, give you credit for in-class exercises which were supposed to be completed in the first half of the semester. 

 

Talking Points:  Throughout the semester we will be reading and discussing selected chapters and essays in our textbook. You will turn in response papers for each reading assignment.  Rather than discursive and essay-like, these responses will be talking points.  Each response should include ten talking points total. By a talking point, I mean an observation, question, or analytical point which you want to raise or think would be worth raising in a class discussion about that reading.  (For example: “Are subjective descriptions less reliable than objective descriptions, or are all descriptions unreliable?” or  “The textbook tells me to limit the scope of my narrative.  Does that mean only to narrate a single day even if I’m writing about a vacation that lasted a week?” or “I can see how Maya Angelou focuses and intensifies her descriptions when she’s inside of Mrs. Flower’s house.”)  Your talking points should demonstrate thoughtfulness and should prove to me that you’ve read the entire reading assignment.  Make sure to include Talking Points about any essays included in the reading assignment.  If a Talking Points paper contains fewer than ten talking points, or if I find some of the talking points irrelevant, silly, or otherwise unacceptable, you will receive only half-credit or no credit for that paper.

We have nine reading assignments on the schedule.  You may skip a Talking Points paper one time during the course of the semester without penalty.  Thus, eight Talking Points papers are due by the end of the semester.

 

Late paper policy:  All papers and drafts are due at the beginning of class on the date due.  Any of the papers not received in class on the date due will be considered late and automatically downgraded.  Also, anyone arriving late for peer review will not be able to participate in peer review.  Students who do not participate in peer review will see the second drafts of those papers reduced in grade by 25%. 

 

Description, dialogue, narration, argument critique, and speech papers: If the second draft of one of these papers is turned in one class period late the paper will be downgraded by 10%.  No second draft will be accepted more than one class period late.

 

Talking Points:  If you miss a class when a Talking Points paper is due, you should turn in the Talking Points the next class period.  The Talking Points will be accepted but the best grade you can get in this case is a half-credit.   No Talking Points papers will be accepted more than one class period late.  

 

 

Absences: Regular attendance is necessary for you to learn and grow as a writer; it is also, quite simply, a requirement of the class.  No student should miss more than 5 classes.  Every absence above five will result in a reduction of 50 points from your semester grade.  Also, frequent, excessive lateness to class is decidedly frowned upon and will affect your grade.  Finally, no student should leave a class early without prior permission.  Doing so will count as an absence.

 

Plagiarism:  Plagiarism is a serious academic offense.  All writing handed in to me must be the student's own work.  If a student submits an essay or assignment written by someone else, that student will automatically receive an F for the course.

 

Points:     Description                                                100

                 Dialogue                                                    100

                 Narrative                                                   100

                 Argument critique                                       100

                 Speech                                                       100

                 Talking Points                                             400 @40 each

                 Journal                                                       400                                 

                 Peer Review                                              400

                 Final portfolio                                             300                                       

              

 

Grades:  Possible semester grades for this course are A, B, C, D, and F.   To move on to Comp 2 (Academic Writing and Research) you must receive at least a C.   A= 1800-2000 points, B= 1600-1799 points, C= 1400-1599 points, D= 1200-1399 points, F= below 1200.

 

Semester schedule--subject to change.

 

Week 1

8/20   Introduction to course.

 

Week 2

8/23   Debunking ideas about writing. 

8/25   Word choice and the value of specificity.   STWW, Ch. 11 pp. 307-312.   

8/27   Word choice continued.

 

Week 3

8/30   Word choice continued.  STWW: “Still Learning from My Mother” by Cliff

           Schneider (319-20), “A Day at the Theme Park” by W. Bruce Cameron (587-88),

           and “In the Land of Coke-Cola” by William Least Heat-Moon (590-92).

9/1     Word choice continued.

9/3      The Narrative.  STWW, Ch. 12.

    

Week 4

9/6      LABOR DAY   

9/8      Description paper due.   Continue discussing narrative. 

9/10    Characterization in narrative.

 

Week 5

9/13    Dialogue in narrative.       

9/15    Dialogue exercise due.

9/17    Beginning and ending your narrative.

 

Week 6

9/20    Continue discussing narrative.  STWW:  “38 Who Saw Murder Didn’t Call the

           Police” by Martin Gansberg (593-95) and “Beauty: When the Other Dancer is the

           Self”by Alice Walker (606-11).                  

9/22    Editing of description paper.  Bring dictionary.

9/24    Prewriting your narrative.        

      

Week 7

9/27    Typed draft of narrative due.  Peer review.  

9/29    Peer review concludes.

10/1    Editing of dialogue exercise.  Bring dictionary.   Also begin to discuss argumentation.      

 

Week 8

10/4   Second draft of narrative due.

10/6   Argumentation continued.  STWW, Ch. 10 pp. 273-82.  (Stop at “Logical Fallacies.”)  

10/8   Argumentation continued.  Logical fallacies.  STWW, Ch. 10 pp. 282-87.

          Journals check.

 

Week 9

10/11   Argumentation continued.  STWW: Opposing essays: “Restrictions Overreach”

            and “Reasonable Limits are Good” (292-94).         

10/13   Discuss argument critique.  Bring chosen newspaper editorial to class.

10/15   FALL BREAK 

 

Week 10

10/18   Peer editing of narrative.  Bring dictionary.

10/20   Prewriting your critique.

10/22   Typed draft of critique due.  Peer review.

 

Week 11

10/25    Beginning an argumentative/persuasive (or expository) essay. 

            STWW, Ch. 4, 79-82. Editing of narrative papers.                         

10/27   Ending an argumentative/persuasive (or expository) essay.

            STWW, Ch. 4 82-87.   

10/29   Second draft of critque due.  Argumentation continued.   Coming up with topics

            and analyzing topics.

    

Week 12

11/1     Preparing your argumentative/persuasive speech.           

11/3     Preparing your argumentative/persuasive speech. 

11/5     Preparing your argumentative/persuasive speech.

 

Week 13

11/8     Argumentative/persuasive speech due.  Speeches begin.

11/10   Speeches continue.    

11/12   Speeches continue.

 

Week 14

11/15   Speeches continue.

11/17   Speeches continue.

11/19   Speeches continue.

 

Week 15

11/22  Speeches continue.        

11/24   THANKSGIVING

11/26   THANKSGIVING

 

Week 16

11/29   Speeches continue.

12/1     Second draft of speech due.

            Journals due.

            Editing of critique.  Bring dictionary.

12/3     No class.  Reading day for exams.

 

 

Final portfolio due at the beginning of our final exam period.  Journals will be returned at that time as well as speeches.  We will conduct editing on the speeches.

 

INSTRUCTIONS FOR MAJOR PAPERS

 

Description

 

Pick one of your favorite spots on campus.  It might be inside or outside, quiet or loud, a place where you go to be with people or to get away from people.  Whatever your reason, go there and stay for a time.  Look, listen, touch, smell, observe.  Then write a description of this place.

In your description use two other senses in addition to the sense of sight, creating a full picture of this place in its fullness.  Also, your description should show some familiarity with the guidelines established in Chapter 11 (e.g., your description should be guided by an overall purpose).  In order to make your description as vivid as possible you may choose to use simile, metaphor, personification, or hyperbole.

Your description should be about two pages long, typed,double-spaced.  Please include a cover page with the information specified on this syllabus.

 

Dialogue

 

Visit a campus location and listen for a time.  Jot down interesting conversations you hear; specifically, conversations that suggest a story, a story that someone would like to have further explained to them.  Listen for conversations where people reveal themselves or something crucial about their “story” just in what they say and how they say it.  From your notes, type up a version of one of these conversations.  This paper should be about two pages long.   Please include a cover page with the information specified on this syllabus.

 

 

Narrative

 

Write a personal essay in which you relate a memorable episode.  Keep in mind the suggestions which the book makes on how to write successful narration and, most importantly, the elements of narration which we emphasize in class, such as using dialogue and specific sensory detail to develop place, character, and situation.  Make sure that you narrate a specific event that happened at a specific time and specific place; don’t talk generally and generically about what your childhood or adolescence was like, and don’t try to narrate whole months or years.  You can’t do that well in a limited length assignment.  As the book says, limit your scope.  Better to go deeply and descriptively into a single episode.  Also remember that most good narratives begin in medias res, i.e., in the middle of the action.   Try to open your narrative essay with action already happening; fill the reader in on necessary background information as you proceed.              

The paper should be 4-5 pages, typed, double-spaced.  Please include a cover page with the information specified on this syllabus.

 

Argument critique

 

In this segment we will be learning about the principles of argumentation and looking at some argumentative essays to see if they work and why (or why not).  For your paper, I want you to locate an essay which appears on the editorial page(s) of the Echo, the Log Cabin, the Democrat-Gazette, or the Arkansas Times.  The editorial page is a separate part of the paper—often at the end of the first section—in which writers take a position on some current, controversial topic, whether it be local or national.  (In other words, they write argumentative essays.)  Do not choose a regular news article or any article, in fact, outside the editorial page.  That will not work because it will not be an argumentative essay.  Do not choose a letter from a reader to the editor.  These are usually very short, too short to conduct a full analysis on.  Do not choose an essay which appeared in some other source besides the newspapers listed above.  Do choose an essay which appeared recently, that is, sometime this semester.  I will not approve the use of an essay which was written any earlier than the start of this semester.

Using the principles of argumentation which are outlined in the textbook, and the format for a critique—which we will discuss in class—write a critique of the editorial essay.  In this assignment I will be looking for a fairly specific overall structure.  Your paper ought to include: a) an introduction (1 paragraph), b.) a summary of the editorial (2 paragraphs), c.) an analysis of the argument (4-5 paragraphs) d.) a personal response (1 paragraph), and e.) a conclusion (1 paragraph).  The core of the critique will be your analysis.  In your analysis I want you to very deliberately cover and comment on five specific aspects of argumentation: tone, audience awareness, logic, evidence, and awareness of opposing positions.  (We will discuss all these aspects, and look at examples, in class.) I want to see a focused commentary on these specific five aspects of argumentation as they appear (or don't) in the editorial.  In short, you are going to tell me how well the editorial works as an argumentative piece.  Realize, then, that the point of the critique is not to debate the issue of the editorial with the writer but to come to a decision on how well argued the editorial is.  What your decision is should be reflected in your thesis statement.  Said another way, you are going to be commenting on the author's performance, not (except in the personal response section of your paper) on the merits of his or her position.  It is perfectly possible that you will disagree with the author's position on the issue and yet still be able to show me with your critique that his editorial is well written, his position well argued.

The paper should be 4-5 pages, typed, double-spaced.  Please include a cover page with the information specified on this syllabus.

 

 

Speech

 

Choose a subject of local interest and/or controversy and write a 3 page, typed, double-spaced, persuasive speech.   The speech will be read aloud by you to the class.  Try to make your speech as persuasive as possible, while at the same time being fair—or at least seeming fair.  Keep in mind the principles of good argumentation that the textbook points out and which we cover in class.  For instance, keep in mind the power of the emotional appeal (especially useful in speeches), and too the importance of recognizing and adequately refuting an opponent’s position.  You may want to follow the “Rogerian technique” outlined in the textbook, in which you try not to overthrow an opponent’s position but to find useful common ground with your opponent.  Your speech might then assert a course of action that would be both beneficial and acceptable to all sides in the given controversy. 

By “local interest” I mean the speech should address a UCA, Conway, Little Rock, or statewide issue.  In order to make your speech authoritative you may need to do some research first.  This may or may not mean heading to the library.  It could mean talking to UCA professors, staff, or administrators.  It could mean surveying your fellow students.  It might mean talking to a local teacher or professional.  It might mean talking to the governor.         

On the day you are scheduled to deliver your speech you must turn in a typed, full-length draft.  Typically, three students per day will deliver speeches.  After all three students have delivered their speeches for that day, the whole class will discuss what was and wasn’t positive about the speeches, how they might be improved.  This discussion will serve as peer review for your speech.  At the end of each class, I will give the drafts back to the students. 

Important note: Presenting your written speech to the class is a requirement for this paper.  If you do not present your speech on the date scheduled you will receive no credit for the assignment.