Biology 4415/5415
GUIDE TO WRITING LAB REPORTS
Some of the labs that we do in this class simply involve turning
in a list of results, filling in a worksheet, or something like
that. However, for most of the labs you will have to turn in a
formal lab report, whose format may be a bit different from the
one you have used in other classes. The format and style of lab
writeups that I want you to use closely follows the general style
of most scientific papers that present original research.
Format: You must type or word-process your lab reports,
print them out in 10-pt or 12-pt type, and turn them in on 8.5"x11"
white paper. I prefer laser-printed or inkjet-printed copies,
but in view of the current printer situation at UCA, dot-matrix
printed reports will be accepted. If you must use dot-matrix printers,
do your best to ensure that they are legible: print in a larger
font if necessary, and try not to print on a printer that is low
on ink. If at all possible, any graphs or charts that are included
should also be done on a computer. I will accept hand-drawn graphs
and charts, but only if they are:
- drawn in blue or black ink
- lettered neatly and legibly in block letters (printing)
- drawn either on appropriate graph paper or blank white paper
- drawn using a straightedge for the axes, with the axes labeled
- drawn with the axes accurately ruled and numbered, and the data
points, lines, and/or bars carefully placed
Like most scientific papers, your lab reports should be divided
into several sections. Typically these will be:
Introduction. In a paragraph or two, explain how the
experiment works. Give the significance of the experiment you
did. State clearly: What hypotheses are being tested? What would
you predict the results to be?
Procedure (or Materials and Methods). Explain
what you did. Since most of this is in the lab manual, this does
not need to be a long section: don't rehash the manual more than
absolutely necessary. However, if you did anything differently
from what's in the handout, include those changes here. We might
run a given exercise several times to look at the effect of various
parameters, for example; or we might have to shorten a lab.
Results. Give the results. Describe them verbally and,
if applicable, include a data table and/or appropriate graphs
at the end of the report.
Discussion. In this section, answer questions such as:
Did the experiment test what it was supposed to? Did the results
match your prediction? If not, why might it not match? What other
factors might have affected your results? How might the experiment
be redesigned to better test the hypothesis? How might it be redesigned
to examine new hypotheses?
An actual paper might devote several pages to each section. Usually
I will be satisfied with a paragraph for each, in part because
I've already done a lot of the work for you by writing up the
labs in the way that I have. But don't limit yourself to one paragraph
if you need more to explain what you've done! If we ended up deviating
from the procedure in the lab manual, you should definitely explain
what we did that was different, and why.
Some people start each section on a separate sheet of paper. Others
have sections follow each other without a page break. Either way
is acceptable. (In the "old days" of typewriters, keeping
sections on separate pages meant that you didn't have to retype
the whole thing if you had to edit just one section. This problem
is moot if you use a word processor to write and edit your reports.)
Whichever you choose, you should begin each section with a capitalized
and centered heading, like so:
INTRODUCTION
The "modern synthesis"
theory of natural selection predicts that changes in gene frequency
are most likely when a population is small. In a large population,
mutation is ineffective in changing allele frequencies, and. . .
PROCEDURE
We used the computer program Simul8
1.0, running on a Macintosh computer, to simulate changes in allele frequency
in a population. The initial settings were. . .
If you have charts, graphs, drawings, original watercolors, etc.,
include them at the end of the paper. Tables belong in a separate
section after the figures; do not include them within the text!
Reference each figure and table in the text where it is relevant,
like so:
A graph (Figure 3) shows that
there was no significant difference between the species after
a week. . .
Our raw class data (Table 1) was
analyzed using the chi-square test. . .
Label each figure in the order in which it is referred to in the
text: Figure 1, Figure 2, etc. Then do the same for tables, labeling
each Table 1, Table 2. . . and placing them after the figures.
Style: Good scientific writing walks a fine stylistic line.
Its function is to convey complex information clearly and understandably.
Excessively informal writing, excessively formal writing, and
errors in spelling and grammar get in the way of this function.
- Avoid piling up unnecessary technical jargon. Good scientific
writing uses technical terms to convey exact shades of meaning,
but no more than are required for getting a point across. Avoid
long synonyms; for instance, don't write "utilize" where
"use" will do, or "due to the fact that" where
"because" will do, or "experienced lethal consequences"
where "died" will do. Don't use redundant synonyms-don't
write "we researched, investigated, examined and turned our
eyes on the problem" when "we examined the problem"
says the same thing.
- On the other hand, don't be chatty or informal. Don't write
in the same style that you would use in talking with friends,
or that I use when giving lectures. Avoid cutesy comments, clichéd
expressions, stylistic quirks, or obvious puns and jokes. Those
rarely impress readers, and they can get in the way of what you're
trying to say. Sometimes good metaphors, subtle humor, and allusions
can really enhance a paper-but be sure they really help you get
your point across. They're very easy to overdo.
- Don't state whether or not you enjoyed the
lab, or how it made you feel, in the write-up. I encourage you
to give me feedback on this-but do it in person, by e-mail, or
on the newsgroup, not in the lab report.
- Some scientists seem to use the passive
voice all the time, writing "the results were observed"
instead of "I observed the results", "the experiment
was carried out" rather than "I did the experiment",
and so on. Taken to extremes, this gives the impression that some
sort of disembodied ghost is doing the science. It can make for
excessively stiff-sounding prose. Don't be afraid to write using
the active voice: you may say "we did the experiment",
etc.
- Spelling, punctuation, grammar, and neatness are all considered
when I grade. You have been warned. Use the spell-checker and
grammar-checker functions on your computer at all times. If you
don't have those, use a good old-fashioned dictionary, and/or
a reference like The Chicago Manual of Style.
- There are times when a student writes a "core dump"-i.e.,
a student writes down everything that he/she can think of that
might be relevant to what they think they're supposed to be writing
about. There's no order, no rhyme or reason to the student's writing-just
a morass of half-digested sentences. Don't do this! Each sentence
in a paragraph should lead to the next one, and all should clearly
and logically support the main idea of the paragraph. The purpose
of these assignments is to present scientific information-not
obscure it.<
Writing Scientific Names: A few special rules apply when
you write the formal Latin name of an organism.
- Remember that when you write the name of a species or a genus,
the genus name is capitalized, the species name is not, and the
whole name is italicized (or underlined, if you can't type italics).
So:
RIGHT | WRONG
|
Paramecium caudatum
| Paramecium Caudatum |
Paramecium caudatum
| paramecium caudatum |
| paramecium Caudatum
|
| Paramecium Caudatum
|
| |
Tyrannosaurus rex |
Tyrannosaurus Rex |
Tyrannosaurus rex |
Tyrannosaurus rex |
| Tyrannosaurus Rex
|
| tyrannosaurus rex
|
This does not apply to higher taxa, which are capitalized but
not italicized: Paramecium caudatum is in the class Ciliophora,
kingdon Protista (not Ciliophora or Ciliophora or
ciliophora, or protista, protista, Protista or Protista).
And Tyrannosaurus rex is in a taxon of dinosaurs called
the Theropoda (not Theropoda, theropoda, theropoda,
etc.) However, if you can Anglicize a taxon name, it goes in lower
case:
Tyrannosaurus rex is a theropod dinosaur.
Tyrannosaurus rex is in the suborder Theropoda in the
order Dinosauria.
- The first time in a paragraph that you use a formal Latin species
name, write it out in full: Drosophila melanogaster or
Tyrannosaurus rex. If you mention it again in the same
paragraph, you should abbreviate the genus name: D. melanogaster,
T. rex. However, don't abbreviate the genus name if doing
so could cause confusion. For instance, if you happened to mention
chokecherry (Prunus virginiana), Virginia pine (Pinus
virginiana) and false dragonhead (Physostegia virginiana)
in the same paragraph or list, you'd have to write them out in
full every time, because P. virginiana could apply to any
one of them.
- Never omit the genus name or abbreviation. Don't refer to species
simply as "melanogaster", "virginiana", etc.
Common Blunders: The rules you hated learning in eleventh-grade
English are going to come back to haunt you now. Here's just a
few tips, based on errors that I see all the time:
- A very common problem many students have (which personally drives
me completely batty!) is the misuse of homophones: words that
sound the same but have different spellings and meanings. Spell-checkers
won't help you with this! Know the difference between their,
there and they're; between its and it's;
between effect and affect; and so on. Ewe half too
no this sew ewe don't make miss steaks.
- Watch those commas! Don't splice complete sentences together
with just a comma; either use a semicolon - or use a long dash
or double hyphen, or just use a comma and a conjunction. Or just
keep them separate sentences. It's often much easier for both
you and me to understand what you're writing about if you break
up long sentences.
- Make sure each paragraph is cohesive-that is, that each sentence
is about the overall topic, and that they fit together in a logical
order. Stick to the point! Don't include anything that's not necessary
for comprehension, and avoid "core dumps". Each paragraph
you write really should have a topic sentence-a sentence that
clearly sums up what the paragraph is about.
- Every sentence in correct formal prose has to have a subject
and a verb. I'm always surprised how often students include sentence
fragments in their writing. (Or should I say: "Surprised
at how often sentence fragments in writing.")
- Do NOT, under any circumstances, use the Echo as an example
of how to write! I want to see you writing better, clearer prose
than our journalism majors. And that shouldn't be difficult.
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